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A Cat Named Sonic

An accident in Tails' lab causes Sonic to turn into a cat. To make things worse for the hedge-err, CAT, he has attracted the unwanted attention of a certain female feline he knows. Join Sonic on a hilarious run through Station Square as he tries in vain to avoid Blaze's affections, all the while encountering his other friends along the way. There's only one problem...will they recognize him? Note: This story was originally a fanfic. COMPLETED


Issue 38: Taken Care Of

June 25th, 2014, 8:40 am

Average Rating: None
Thank you Mario Bros!
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Author's Comments:

Reply witswithme, June 25th, 2014, 8:41 am

Whew! Glad that's over with...

Also, panic time, since I'm still #3 on the Upcoming list, and once #1's done, I'm practically next, 'cause #2 will be reviewed QUICKLY.

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User's Comments:

Reply kevansevans, June 25th, 2014, 9:37 am

prepare for unforeseen consequences

Reply The_Project, June 25th, 2014, 12:36 pm

@kevansevans: ..., K.

Reply Advertisement, June 25th, 2014, 7:04 pm

I think your comic could really benefit from larger panels and sizing those sprites up. And well...better writing and characterization really. I hate to say that but the way you write some characters (mostly Blaze) is pretty bad.

It also kinda bothers me that the description says "will they recognize him?" but that issue is resolved in like, 3 pages.

Reply witswithme, June 25th, 2014, 8:23 pm

Duly noted. @Advertisement: I admit that I am a rookie at the spriting and panel sizes; that I'm trying to experiment on. The story, however, isn't mine.

"Sonic the Cat" was a story written by a guy who gave himself the internet alias of "Yoshi 2.1", and his story, although it had its moments of craziness, was an enjoyable read. If you were to search up "Sonic the Cat by Yoshi 2.1" and look at its description, and then compare it to mine, you would notice that, with the exception of a few differences, they are alike. In the second chapter of "Sonic the Cat", Sonic runs into Knuckles, marking the test of whether people would recognize Sonic as a cat, since Blaze was turned into an exaggerated Amy Rose for the story. In chapter 3, Sonic runs into Shadow and chapter 4, Silver. The fact that some of the characters were OOC made the story interesting, but the only one that bothered me was Shadow. Yeah, Blaze was a weird case, as she's normally the introvert (and that she keeps her feelings to herself), but Shadow's supposed to be a bad***. He considers himself the Ultimate Life Form who doesn't really have to answer to anyone except his friends (Team Dark). Why then, would he care about what Sonic would do to him? Why would he give a **** to what Sonic's problems are? But I digress.

I admit, I could've changed up the script a bit, but I never truly thought about doing such a thing at that moment.

I thank you though, for your advice and concerns for how to make this better. Considering though that this comic is going to end VERY soon (like in 3 comics or so), I'm probably going to leave this as it is and try something different the next time I make a webcomic. Again, thanks for the advice, 'cause I'm-a be using this advice in the next production.

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